好像有點亂

剛貼上的一篇,在安排上好像有點亂。女孩的角色,是女主角,也是寫故事的人(寫故事的人不是我)。故事中的故事。讀者能弄清楚嗎?

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

有點亂了.. 我想我得重頭開始看過 :S

Posted by keng at 2005-08-07 22:39:17

San Wen Ji said...

Keng, thanks for your feedback.

I may need to read it by myself too. It is the problem of not assigning a name to the character. Easy to confuse the reader.